【摘要】 论文返修(response letter)一些很有用的套话

壹

 

 1  According to the associate editor and reviewers’ comments, we have made extensive modifications to our manuscript and supplemented extra data to make our results convincing.

 

 2  In this revised version, changes to our manuscript were all highlighted within the document by using red-colored text.

 

 3  Thank you for your nice comments on our article. According to your suggestions, we have supplemented several data here and corrected several mistakes in our previous draft. Based on your comments, we also attached a point-by-point letter to you and the other two reviewers. We have made extensive revisions to our previous draft. The detailed point-by-point responses are listed below.

 

 4  Thanks for your help. We feel really sorry for our carelessness.

 

 5  Thank you for your reminder. You and the other two reviewers’ comments are all of great importance to our article. All of these comments have contributed a lot to improving the quality of our article. After this revision, we have written a point-by-point response letter to you as you can see above. Meanwhile, we also wrote a point-by-point response letter to the other two nice reviewers to acknowledge their help and denote where we made revisions.

 

 6  We feel great thanks for your professional review work on our article. As you are concerned, there are several problems that need to be addressed. According to your nice suggestions, we have made extensive corrections to our previous draft. We have added the necessary data to supplement our results and edited our article extensively. The detailed corrections are listed below.

 

 7  We feel sorry that we did not provide enough information about XXXX.

 

 8  it is really a giant mistake to the whole quality of our article. We feel sorry for our carelessness. We have corrected it and we also feel great thanks for your point out.

 

 9  thanks for your suggestions. We feel sorry for our poor writings, however, we do invite a friend of us who is a native English speaker from USA help polish our article. Due to our friend’s help, the article was edited extensively. And we hope the revised manuscript could be acceptable for you.

 

贰

 

 1  thanks for your careful checks. We are sorry for our carelessness. Based on your comments, we have made the corrections to make the unit harmonized within the whole manuscript.

 

 2  your suggestion really means a lot to us. Yes, it would be more understandable if we XXX.

 

 3  According to your suggestion, we have corrected the “XXX” into “XXX”.

 

 4  thanks for your correction. It was indeed a serious grammatical error. And we have corrected it according to your suggestion.

 

 5  thanks for your suggestions. We feel sorry for the improper wording. We have used “XXXX” as you suggested.

 

 6  According to the reviewer’s comments, we have revised the manuscript extensively. If there are any other modifications we could make, we would like very much to modify them and we really appreciate your help. “xxxx” is a journal of great popularity and prestige. We hope that our manuscript could be considered for publication in your journal. Thank you very much for your help.

 

叁

 

 1  Firstly, we would like to thank you for your kind letter and for the reviewers’ constructive comments concerning our article (Manuscript No.:XXXXX). These comments are all valuable and helpful for improving our article. All the authors have seriously discussed all these comments. According to the reviewers’ comments, we have tried our best to modify our manuscript to meet the requirements of your journal. In this revised version, changes to our manuscript within the document were all highlighted by using red-colored text. Point-by-point responses to the reviewers are listed below this letter.

 

 2  If there are any other modifications we could make, we would like very much to modify them and we really appreciate your help. Thank you very much for your help.

 

 3  Thanks. We have corrected these mistakes based on your suggestions.

 

 4  Thank you again for your positive comments and valuable suggestions to improve the quality of our manuscript.

 

 5  we were really sorry for our careless mistakes. Thank you for your reminder.

 

 6  Thanks for your nice suggestions. We have formatted all the references.

 

 7  It is with excitement that I resubmit to you a revised version of the manuscript （稿号）for the 杂志名. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to revise and resubmit this manuscript. In keeping with my last communication with you, I am resubmitting this revision before the agreed-upon deadline. I appreciate the time and detail provided by each reviewer and by you and have incorporated the suggested changes into the manuscript to the best of my ability. The manuscript has certainly benefited from these insightful revision suggestions. I look forward to working with you and the reviewers to move this manuscript closer to publication in the杂志名. （返修有拖延时用）

 

 8  I have responded specifically to each suggestion below, beginning with your own. To make the changes easier to identify where necessary, I have numbered them.

 

 9  Thank you again for your positive comments on our manuscript. 杂志名is an influential journal that aims to improve our understanding of cancer prevention/other. From all the papers published in your journal, readers have been learning a lot. Hopefully, we could have our article been considered of publication in your journal. Should there be any other corrections we could make, please feel free to contact us.

 

 10  Thank you for your kind comments on our manuscript entitled “文章名”. We have carefully revised the manuscript according to the reviewer’s comments. Based on the suggestions, we have made an extensive modifications to the revised manuscript. The detailed revision was shown as follows. The changes to our manuscript within the document were also highlighted by using red-colored text.

 

 11  We feel great thanks for your professional review work on our article. As you are concerned, there are several problems that need to be addressed. According to your nice suggestions, we have made extensive corrections to our previous draft, the detailed corrections are listed below.

 

 12  According to the reviewer’s comments, we have revised the manuscript extensively. If there are any other modifications we could make, we would like very much to modify them and we really appreciate your help. We hope that our manuscript could be considered for publication in your journal. Thank you very much for your help.

 

 13  On behalf of all the contributing authors, I would like to express our sincere appreciation for your letter and reviewers’ constructive comments concerning our article entitled “XXX文章” (Manuscript No.:XXXX). These comments are all valuable and helpful for improving our article. According to the associate editor and reviewers’ comments, we have made extensive modifications to our manuscript and supplemented extra data to make our results convincing. In this revised version, changes to our manuscript were all highlighted within the document by using red-colored text. Point-by-point responses to the nice associate editor and two nice reviewers are listed below this letter.

 

 14  We would like to thank you first for all the positive comments of our manuscript (No.: XXXX) entitled “XXXXX”. We really appreciate your help and patience. We also think highly of the comments of both reviewers who kindly provide professional suggestions on our manuscript. we have seriously thought about them and provided our response to reviewers. For a detailed response, please see below.

 

肆

 

 1  Thank you for your email dated xxxxxx[[1 June 2016]] enclosing the reviewers’ comments. We have carefully reviewed the comments and have revised the manuscript accordingly. Our responses are given in a point-by-point manner below. Changes to the manuscript are shown in underline/red/bold.

 

 2  I very much appreciate the time and effort you’ve put into your comments. Your advice about the formatting, structure, and referencing style of my paper is most helpful.

 

 3  Further to our correspondence a couple of weeks ago, I’m attaching the revised version of my article entitled “XXXX” I have now completed all of the changes you requested: （改格式）

 

The numerical style of in-text referencing has been changed to author-date referencing in APA style.

 

The list of references has been arranged alphabetically by the last names of authors instead of numerically, and other changes to conform to APA style have been made to the references.

 

The article has been restructured to include separate Limitations and Conclusions sections.

 

All headings and subheadings have been adjusted to conform to the requirements indicated in the Journal of Changing Weather author guidelines, including the removal of numbers.

All nonstandard abbreviations and acronyms used in the paper have been defined on first use and used consistently thereafter.

 

Abbreviations used in each table have been defined in a note at the bottom of the table.

 

The vertical rules/lines have been removed from all three tables.

 

The tables are now attached as a separate file instead of embedded in the paper.

 

 4  I hope that the changes I’ve made resolve all your concerns about the article. I’m more than happy to make any further changes that will improve the paper and/or facilitate successful publication.

 

 5  Thank you once again for your time and interest. I look forward to hearing from you.

 

 6  We thank reviewers for their constructive criticism, and time spent analyzing this manuscript, The responses, and explanations related to their comments are listed below:

 

 7  We agree with the reviewer’s comment concerning this issue. However, …….

 

 8  As a response to the reviewer’s comment we……..

 

 9  We thank the reviewer for the kind comments.

 

 10  we thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We have corrected it to “XXXXX”

 

 11  We agree with the reviewer. In response to this comment and to a comment raised by the other reviewer, we have revised the text as follows.

 

 12  Based on these comments and suggestions, we have made careful modifications to the original manuscript, and carefully proofread the manuscript to minimize typographical and grammatical errors. We believe that the manuscript has been greatly improved and hope it has reached your magazine’s standard.

 

 13  Once again, we acknowledge your comments very much, which are valuable in improving the quality of our manuscript.

 

 14  We are very grateful for your comments on the manuscript.

 

 15  We thank you very much for your comments for pointing out this omission. Now, in the revised manuscript, we have corrected……

 

 16  We are very grateful for your comments and thoughtful suggestions. In the revised manuscript, we have modified……

 

 17  In conclusion, according to the comments, we give a detailed revision of the original manuscript. At the same time, we have thoroughly revised the manuscript in order to express the idea more clearly. The major revision is listed in the following. We believe the manuscript has been greatly improved. Once again, thank you for the kind advice.

 

 18  thanks for your suggestions. We feel sorry for our poor writings, however, we do invite a friend of us who is a native English speaker from USA help polish our article. Due to our friend’s help, the article was edited extensively. And we hope the revised manuscript could be acceptable for you.